Well, from a layman's viewpoint: the pale blue color is neither hot nor cold
and is too "blah"; the pages take forever to load, especially the cbphobby
page, and the lack of even simple graphics was noticeable, and the pages
generally were too 'empty.' I know that generally less is more, but
sometimes, less is empty. I really liked the water effect on the logo, but
the load time was quite long. I have a 56K dialup, IE5.5, WinME. If you can
work in HTML and CGI and JavaScript and Flash you are quite talented, and it
all needs to be combined with a design with 'punch' and the text does not do
justice to your talents . The prospective customer needs to know why they
should hire 'YOU' for their job. If I were doing the pages I'd probably try
to have them load as a single screen without slide bars, maybe menu items
on both sides and really specific text in between. Suggest a very pale green
background - something to compliment the dark blue of the logo, with some
sort of dark green accent to pick up the same value as the dark blue. The
colors totally should be three, ideally. Good luck. MikeG in Philly
MikeG in Philly
"Brian McKim" <Editors@sheckymagazine.com> wrote in message
news:3A736461.76F75BA8@sheckymagazine.com...
> Applet never did kick in...I am using Netscape 4.5
>
> For a design site, it's pretty...un-exciting...perhaps,
> to quote your own site, "you just need some eye-catching graphics."
>
> Also: I clicked on "Flash Development," and I am still waiting
> for something to happen...connected at 44K...
>
> P.S. Your logo just came up for the first time in 3 tries...at
> first it was a white box...then the second time I visited, it
> was a black box...now it's your logo.
>
> WDC wrote:
> >
> > Please Critique my site
> >
> >
www.webdesigncork.f2s.com
> >
> > Thanks in advance
> > WDC
>
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